my words

My Dirty Laundry..

my words to

your heart

are like te absolute

magnitude of

the sun from Alaska

my words are sweet enough..

they drag you down

and then pull

you up

Author's Notes/Comments: 

deceiving people about my dirty laundry

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Sandeep  N S's picture

I really very much liked the way u'd written this work.A modern format,of blending imageries with meaning in an abstarct but a clear-cut way of expression.Writing style is very precise here,Neatly paused,In the middle"my words are sweet enough.."
Over all,i really enjoyed this work.And i gonna check out some of ur other works too.Before i would like to ask u If there is any particular style of writing u'd used here.Just curious.

Thank u,