helpless victim of mine and yours


you are the helpless victim

of the tangled enmeshment of

our problems.

i succumb to the

entranced intoxification of your

lips on mine and our legs

  i n t e r t w i n e d

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Sandeep  N S's picture

Wow,In a few words,How strong u made ur point.Really talented writer u r.Must learn st from u.If u dont mind give me some tips too.

I loved ur way with words here "enmeshment" "entranced" "intoxification " "i n t e r t w i n e d"
Satrnge words,Starnge meanings.Smartly used.Loved the way u had ended this poem.So seducing...i felt going thro'...if i may say so:-)