Darkness Falls

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I feel a pinch of pain

It's numb from my wrist down

I lift my hand

To my surprise its covered in blood

My hand is curled so sickly

Sticky red saddness

Trickles to the floor

A puddle of blood beneth my feet

A knife in my right hand

I've thought so long of doing this

But just couldn't find the nerve

Something trigered it

I don't know how or why it happened

But as I stand with my back to the wall

I picture my family, friends and foe

I slide so slowly down the wall

My life goes by my eyes

I've had a good life

Good times are even with the bad

I'm growing weaker, I cannot move

I'm paralized with fear

I realize I don't want to go

Then darkness falls

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Big Sis's picture

Okay sweety, I checked, and it's not the same poem, just a very very similar one. But anyways, this is probably one of the most depressing poems I've ever read. Worse than anything I've ever written. I hope to God you don't really feel that way, or your gonna get smothered to death by the biggest, longest most annoying bear hug you've ever had next time I get a chance!! Luv ya!
~*Hugz*~
Manda

Abbey Reeder's picture

i really like this poem. i can relate to it in so many ways i feel as if you had written the poem about me. im not going to go into detail just thought i would comment on it. once again, really nice poem.