Broken

I don't know what I really deserve

I am comparing myself to others

Even when in the back of my mind I know I'm yours



I don't know what I have that makes me worth while

Look at him, he's got the abilities to make her smile

He's got athletics, he's outgoing

and here I am not even knowing where I'm headed



I looked around everybody was having fun

and inside I'm broken apart

May be I just revealed to much of myself

I'm pretending I'm ok, now I just want to run away

But at the same time I need someone to talk to

My heart hurts for others

I can feel it inside

I hate seeing the people I care about cry

And there is no one around I can support

I think everyone is just scared of me

I just keep crying out for understanding






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Alana Culbertson's picture

hey!
Well, this one was really good. I think almost everyone can relate. But, I think that maybe you have alot going for you even though sometimes it doesnt feel like it. I mean you have your poetry (which is really good)and you have God, which is the best thing in the world you can have. And, it seems like you show alot of mercy to the people you love and i know what it feels like to see them cry and not be able to do anthing about it, but i hope things turn out good for you in the future. Keep up the good work!
alana