Grow

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2012

Where do you turn to
When you cannot trust yourself?

 

Stuck in the gray
No impulsive energy
To brace upon a wavering truth

 

When your heart's in the right place
But it turns out that place may be your feet
How do you make ends meet?

 

Based on my meandering experience
The only file in this tower
That contends with this error
Is devout immersion in each junction
and comparison of which feels most genuine and prosperous

 

Do not fear your imperfections
Succumb willingly and of knowledgeable mind to them
Allow the journey to dictate the road and do not inverse

 

Do not convert
Adjust to yourself instead
Grow

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2012

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Bloodbutterfly's picture

Now I've only read

Now I've only read a few of your poems do far and I like bits and bits of many of them, but out of the ones I've read this is my favorit. Great job!


You can only be as beautiful as you tell yourself you are, but you can't let beauty get to your head.

deepblue's picture

thank you keep writin! :)

thank you keep writin! :)

deepblue's picture

Thank you very much Dove,

Thank you very much Dove, I'll have to give your work a look :) much appreciated

leeblue's picture

boy have i been there.. very

boy have i been there.. very true, i loved it... i look forward to reading more :)... i especially like the end where you give some very usefull advice.


lee

deepblue's picture

thank you very much Lee :)

thank you very much Lee :) I'll have to do the same and give your work some reading as well

Mardigan's picture

Perhaps you are right on the

Perhaps you are right on the ending. Very nice writing though, I can tell there's heartfelt put into it.

deepblue's picture

thank you very much for you

thank you very much for you kind words, Mardigan - i'll have to take a look at your work in the near future :)