The face in the fire 1-7-05

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I look at your picture

And think about the happiness we had

All the laughter and smiles

Never was there a feeling of sad

I stare at your picture

Think of all the great memories

The memories of us

That will never be again



I stare at the fire

With it's enchanting grace

How it's beauty resembles you

I can almost see your face

I stare into the flames

That shall never be forgotten

The damage it causes can be great

But it's nothing without it's partner



I look at your picture

As it burns in the fire

All memories being forgotten

All the pain fading away

I stare at your picture

As it turns into ashes

Although you are gone

I'll always remember you

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This poem is about a guy who loved a girl. Until a fire killed her. There is a lot of foreshadowing in this is you read carefully. Such as startin at the picture in the fire. And how it causes damage. And how it is nothing without it's partner. I won't tell you the rest of the hidden parts in here. I'll let you find them for yourself.

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Nikki Wright's picture

some of your poems are deep and intense but they are really good

Jessica Brady's picture

"... pictures fade away but memories forever!"

Quote by New Found Glory

ValentineBuchannan's picture

its cool i like it very good use of forshadowing...
love
kasi*huggs,huggs,huggs*


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beautifulpain's picture

Dude this rocks. Sorry I havn't been able to sign all of yours but I've been trying to sign one everyday. Thanks for signing mine and what not. How did you come up with these big words? I try to do it and it just makes me look stupid. Well peace.

Jessica's picture

I know the feeling of being in love and having that person die and it's not a good feeling. Every poem/song that you write I can relate to some way in my own life!

Nic's picture

thats really sweet, sad too.... reeeeally hope its not coming from a personal experience. youre a gifted writer though, dont give it up