Abandoned

The fires of hell rage on

All that I care for is gone

My dreams went up in smoke

On my tears I start to choke



They've all left me alone

Onto the curb I was thrown

I thought I knew them well

No help came forth after I fell



Why did you forsake me?

While with you I felt free

Many sacrifices I have made

My only friend now is the blade



Skin is pierced and blood flows

As I suffer like no one knows

In time these wounds will heal

What won't fade is the pain I feel

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Candice Smith's picture

With the exception of the blade part, this poem reminds me of my feelings toward my friends...in my life everyone leaves and I've come to except that fact. I like this poem, it is very well written, keep up the writing.

~Gentle Breezes~