My perfect dose


We’re just

Two young lovers dancing beneath the moonlight

One step to the left, two steps to the right

Don’t worry baby you can step on my feet

We can dance our own speed to our two hearts beat

We reach the last note and lean in real close

And when we kiss it’s my perfect dose


Author's Notes/Comments: 

not finished yet, just wanted reactions  from readers

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justanotherscreename's picture

Love it. Even if it isn't

Love it. Even if it isn't finished, it is good enough as it is already! Of course that shouldn't stop you from adding to it until you think it is ready.

DarkLight's picture

Thank you

Thank you very much, but yes, I am adding to it