My trashcan poetry

the weeds have choked out the roses
where I used to pluck the petals 
she loves me 
she loves me not 
now I don't have to wonder anymore
everything I was ever about is gone now 
but the mem'ries still remain

~ D Donner ~

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I like it, its short but I

I like it, its short but I can feel your emotion through this. Deep sadness.

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DatDemi I thank you for the

DatDemi I thank you for the good review 

I was afraid it was going to be to short an some might be going

HUGH ????

I don't know how the rest of you do it but My work is strictly

done at the spur of the moment. what ever comes out comes out 

if I try to analyze it  ,I'll screw it up everytime

So now I just throw it out there an see what comes back !


 ~ D D ~

Every story-teller bends the myth to his own purpose. that's why a Hero has a thousand faces