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will it be what breaks me ?

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The Ramblings Of A Madman
sunrises used to be something 
special to see 
now it's just a sign telling me
I've wakened up to not being dead 
 
having watched the end of our beginning
I wonder if it will be 
what breaks me ?
that's yet to be seen 
 
sunset's used to be something 
to share with someone
now their just a prelude to tonight's main attraction 
once upon a memory , then again in a dream
or now the nightmare begins 
 
the end of our beginning keep's 
playing over an over in my head
slowly do my tears flow
"tears" an expression of a pain 
that can never be shown 
on a sheet of fucking paper
thus diluting the meanings behind 
what I try to write
 
which in return leaves Me in a state of 
confusion
that flies around inside of My head 
like the black raven
an knowing the trickster that he is 
I just never know what to beleive
 
Hey you my friend
the raven say's to Me
you are even more fucked  up
than it initially appeared
in the end of your beginning 
will that be what breaks you ?
 why the hell are you asking me ?
 
into the shadows He fly's
laughing all the way 
 
sunrises used to be something 
special to see 
now it's just a sign telling me
I've wakened up to ..............
Not being dead 
 
I guess that's the answer to the question
 
It hasn't broken Me........ Yet 
 
~ D Donner ~ 
Author's Notes/Comments: 

kinda off the wall even for Me. 

I'd blame it on the Hydrocodone

but to many of You have already figured out .

I am off the wall Normally!

just hope it makes sense to someone other than Me ! ~ D D ~

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last updated 10 March 2014 - 5:48am
©9 March 2014 - 8:18am — Daniel-59
27 May 2014 - 7:45am — millyardo
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i love it. good shit sir

i love it. good shit sir

9 March 2014 - 10:16am — SSmoothie
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Yeah, man you pulled words

Yeah, man you pulled words out of my soul I didn't want to see again. But, it didn't kill me I survived and remembered too much the sweetness before the sour blackness. It's got some bugs with flow but man I loved it! 

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

9 March 2014 - 3:45pm — Daniel-59
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Well after waking up from a

Well after waking up from a drug induced coma

brought on by to much physical Pain.

I came back to see what it was I was babbling about !

an Seeing as how it was already out there.....?

I just dusted off a few of the ROCK'S with a 3lb hammer ....lol


SOOOOooooo My Twisted Sister ? 

Be it it flowing better or should I get out the Explosives !!! ROFLMCAO !

Every story-teller bends the myth to his own purpose. that's why a Hero has a thousand faces