Home

I dance beneath the rain

Folder: 
My trashcan poetry

I dance beneath the rain because 
there are just some things
that you just can’t win
an beneath the rain 
no one ask's 
why are you crying ?

 

in the rain there are moments
quiet , simple an few 
I once aspired to be angel 
but got caught up in our sin
it was not just lust 
but then again not quite love
feelings all too real for lovers 
in a facade

but I would of taken that ride to hell 

to make them real


I dance beneath  the rain because 

there are just some things
that you just can’t win

~ D Donner ~

View daniel-59's Full Portfolio
  • Login to post comments
  • 203 reads

last updated 31 January 2014 - 7:00am
©31 January 2014 - 7:00am — Daniel-59
2 February 2014 - 4:01pm — Beavis
Beavis's picture

Bravo Sir!

You make the emotional connections dance!

1 February 2014 - 7:53am — running_with_rabbits
running_with_rabbits's picture

I fuckin love your work! your

I fuckin love your work! your words always get to me and get me! its like phases of my life in the sections of this poem, my youth hiding sorrow by embracing happiness and moments, the mid 20s where I needed rain to wash me clean of all the ways I stabbed myself in the back, the end like the beginning, admitting defeat and embracing the sorrow

 

just beautiful work, this poem just sinks in my soul right now

so glad I read it

Much Love

Ashley

31 January 2014 - 7:56am — millyardo
millyardo's picture

Good stuff sir, good stuff

Good stuff sir, good stuff indeed.