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just maybe
maybe i'm not cutout for this
maybe i'm supposed to follow a different path
supposed to go in a different direction
maybe i'm supposed to achieve something else
maybe i'm not cutout for this
maybe i'm supposed to follow a different path
supposed to go in a different direction
maybe i'm supposed to achieve something else
this poem can really get a person thinking about whwat they're doing in life and if that's whats suppose to be happening. I hope that's what its meant to do. I really like this poem, as well as alot of your other, i just never know what to say in critiques.
your simplicity is perfect. this sounds like something i would write. i like it a lot. it made me think... and wonder what you were thinking when you wrote it.