self pity crap

Life has left me stranded

Fending for myself

Fighting my own battles

With no one to back me up

I’ve been knocked down

Way too many times

I don’t want to get back up

I have no strength left in me

Why couldn’t it have been kinder

Treated me a little better

Now I don’t know who I am

Or where I am

I guess I lost the fight

Lost myself

Lost my mind

I’m dead inside


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Abbey Reeder's picture

i like this poem i guess because i can like so relate to it. its kind of scary to be here and feeling like your dead inside and that it seems that you can no longer go on but just some how keep living and going on. keep the faith.

Matt Handlos's picture

almost sounds like a song chorus or something like that. its always nice to be able to wrap up all of your emotions at the end of the poem with a few lines.

Dayle B's picture

great poem... reminds me of how i feel sometimes... at least it always passes