Moving Fast

The clock is ticking, time flys by

its moving quick, and I don't know why

It's almost done, the hands move fast

how much longer can this last?



Now I'm moving slow as last seconds come

When it hits zero will it all be done?

Thoughts begin to turn into moments

Its all over! Everyone knows it



Did I make it? I hide the clock

looking down and still in schock

time ran out, its all gone

life's dusk turns to dawn



The clock starts back at twelve

in the next hour and all is well

once again time flys by

its moving fast and I still don't know why.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This is about me starting the next big part of my life.

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Afzal Shauq's picture

interesting and lovely poem and this stanza is written very pefactly..
Did I make it? I hide the clock
looking down and still in schock
time ran out, its all gone
life's dusk turns to dawn

love your poetry and enjoying it.. hope you like my peace thoughts too..yours