10. Thresholds - Two voices one crossing

A person standing in the threshold between light and shadow, visualising the dual voices poem concept.

Standing at the threshold: two voices, one crossing — which will you hear first? Placeholder image by Midjourney v7.

 



Thresholds - Two voices one crossing

 

 

 

Voice of Surrender

 

The night presses in, heavy as regret,

Shadows coil, whispering, “Let go.”

I count the names I cannot save,

Each memory a stone in my pocket.

My beasts curl, sensing the end,

I leave instructions, trembling,

for a world that will not remember.

The streets wait, cold and unyielding,

I have no more shelter to give.

I write my name as a closing,

My ink a river running dry.

I slip into hush, a final release,

A whisper lost in the dark.

 

 

 

Voice of Resolve

 

The night presses in, but I strike a match,

Shadows coil, whispering, “Hold on.”

I count the names I carry forward,

Each memory a lantern in my hand.

My beasts curl, waiting for dawn,

I leave instructions, trembling,

for a world that may yet remember.

The streets wait, cold but unbroken,

I have more shelter to find.

I write my name as a beginning,

My ink a river rising strong.

I step into hush, a gathering breath,

A whisper forging the dawn.

 

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

 

Here, the internal conflict is externalised. This contrapuntal poem presents two distinct voices — Surrender and Resolve — battling at a critical juncture. It can be read as separate monologues or interwoven to reveal the complex, simultaneous realities of a soul in crisis.




Please note:  This contrapuntal poem presents two distinct voices. They can be read separately, or interwoven line by line to create a third, combined narrative.



To read interwoven:

 

Start with the first line of “Voice of Surrender” joined with the first line of “Voice of Resolve” (“The night presses in, heavy as regret, but I strike a match,”), then the second lines joined (“Shadows coil, whispering, “Let go.” “Hold on.””) and so on.

 


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