I like your choreography of several processes, in this poem, and the lack of punctuation is very strategically shrewd, as it gives the poem (which we must read it from margin to margin, horizontally, in real time) the artistic sense that everything is going on at once, and not in a progression from first to last, left to right, or top to bottom. To do so in such a small space, with such few words, is an awesome command of language and of poetic structure.
From dance to music to poetry, these are connections to cherish and explore further on. This much appreciated feedback brings to mind the capacity of lines of verse to transform into a journey of language and beyond should we so dispose ourselves. Thank you most kindly.
I like your choreography of
I like your choreography of several processes, in this poem, and the lack of punctuation is very strategically shrewd, as it gives the poem (which we must read it from margin to margin, horizontally, in real time) the artistic sense that everything is going on at once, and not in a progression from first to last, left to right, or top to bottom. To do so in such a small space, with such few words, is an awesome command of language and of poetic structure.
Starward
From dance to music to
From dance to music to poetry, these are connections to cherish and explore further on. This much appreciated feedback brings to mind the capacity of lines of verse to transform into a journey of language and beyond should we so dispose ourselves. Thank you most kindly.
here is poetry that doesn't always conform
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