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I need a sign,
today, maybe tomorrow
and Ill be there
I know i ask too much
I just need your touch
I’m true to you, and it wont fade
not tonight, not in my reality
what more will a sign do for me
what more can i ask of it
Is there something left of us
tell me yes, and i will profess
my fate gloom’s upon it
but yet i seek it none the less
I discover a grey outlook changes nothing
no frown makes me need you less than before
I’m still here transfixed
I’ll die like those from before
hoping till the last moment
for something more

e.a.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Any constructive criticism would be most welcome :)

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MoonCruxCollision's picture

\/ very strong poems down

\/ very strong poems down there, enjoyed them a lot, you girls are awesome

Morningglory's picture

I guess you inspired me...

A touch for you my love
I know it's late
I've thought about you
all Throughout the day
It never stops
You're on my mind
It seems to happen all the time


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MissSaigon's picture

I'm not bragging or anything...

But it feels like you've read my thoughts and turned it into an amazing poem! I really love how it really relates to how I feel right now. <3

SSmoothie's picture

Gosh you have talent! I love

Gosh you have talent! I love your work, but those digits are a pain! Lol!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

MoonCruxCollision's picture

Thank you, the slogan was my

Thank you, the slogan was my uncles and i stole it when i was 10 i think, kept using it ever since, it has no meaning to me lol

SSmoothie's picture

Haha! I have to admit I

Haha! I have to admit I cringe every time I see it! ;) it has no baring on your talents though, awesome indeed!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

MoonCruxCollision's picture

For you i change it to one of

For you i change it to one of my alter cruxes haha :p