Remodel Work


I built a fortress

To protect me

From harm and hurt

But one day

I opened the door

And let someone in

He repaid me

For all my kindness

By remodeling

My entire castle

He demolished it

Every stone into dust

And it all blew away

Now I stand

With no protection

But I feel

More guarded than ever

I’m so scared

Shivering with cold

Lost and alone

Now where oh where

Did I find those bricks

In the first place

The better question

Do I build

To keep you in

Or out?



Written on

August 21, 2008

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I am not really sure who i wrote this to but it still sounds good.

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