In the Fury of Emotion

In the fury of emotion I find no way to navigate.

The storm is calling out to me should I idee it's plea.

As I drown down to the bottom of the sea

The cast is breaking like a needle though my heart.

The bow is cracking though the middle, tearing us apart.

The storm can hit us with all of its might

Forged by our friendship this ship will not sink this night.

Turn the wheel to the right

To each other hold on tight

In the morning still afloat we will see the sun so bright

The tragedy of night before will just be a memory

Finally till the end friends you and me will be.



In the fury of emotion i find no way to breath

continuing to suffacate my mind still bleeds

hurls out one more breath to feed this hunger

all the others were missing your thunder

seems you might be my love my first

the one to cure this cursed curse

i will be yours and you will be mine

from now until the end of time


Author's Notes/Comments: 

You can look at this poem in the star wars universe the storm representing the dark side.

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Carlamarie Haynes's picture

I really like this one. I have a best friend who i love greatly and this poem explains exactly how i feel about her. As if the world itself could throw any problems our way but nothing could ever weaken the relationship that we have; pain can only make it stronger.

'The storm can hit us with all of its might
Forged by our friendship this ship will not sink this night'

I think this poem has a strong emotionally meaning behind it and the wording (in particular the lines above) work well to convey this message