Heartbreak

A broken bone will readily mend,

  also an arm,a leg,a hand;

But a broken heart when love departs,

  both grief and heartache will contend;

To see which will control the soul

  and on too hell will send;

For neither will consent to give,

  permission to heal the rend.

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Enormous arcs of meaning compressed into verbal economy: this is the classic style that goes back to Alexandria of the Ptolemiac era . . . and you have achieved that style in this beautiful poem. Being classic and contemporary is a difficult mix for most; obviously, you have well mastered it already.


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