Lisa, Lisa, Lisa

Folder: 
In Cold Blood.

in she walks,

looking a lot like

a victim,

pre disposed ugliness

stuck to her skin,

vacant eyes, and a bruised heart

make falling out,

a story that's written, all over her face.



strangled by truths,

cold and cruel,

change can rupture life, so deep

to watch you bleed

is to know your suffering.



dark circles beneath a halo,

frail hellos, in an attempt to hide from me,

you barely make an effort of appeal,

sulking in denial, drowning.




Author's Notes/Comments: 

Lisa is the tragic but typical story of a girl
who smoked too much methamphetamines, and lost herself, i tried to help, but girls like her, well.

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Same story here!, Yeha that is true. I can relate this poem to some people I know. Well, I got few friends that I made them to stop smoking, but I didn't have victory with the mayority. they still smoking, (They ain't my friend, but I always try to help) well, it is bad for them. I feel sorrow. Good poem. it is good. I kind of like it.
Have a nice and beautiful life!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~My Best Wishes~
;)