White VS.

I am white.

Clean and pure.

(though sometimes dusty from lack of use)

My mistakes and flaws

are promintently displayed

from a smooth skin canvas.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Thoughts on color....

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Fiona Graves's picture

i love all that you've done. your phrases are remarkable but i just wish there were more. it doesn't reaally have a prominent ending i feel.

andshedied's picture

actually this was really good, but i still like the haiku for me the best....

andshedied's picture

you racist.