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Poems of Sadness

When you cry

And you see people stare

You feel all different and weird



You think you are the only one crying

But actually other people are crying inside

They keep it in

Because they don?t want people to know they cry



I believe a true tear is when you can cry in front of all your friends

And not be ashamed of it,

Because everyone cries



The main reason you cry is

Because you are sad

And you feel the only way to get it out is to cry



Once it is all over

You feel better

And you feel more peace

Because the pain is gone



I believe true love or a true friend

Is when your friend is crying

And you are there to be her shoulder



I believe true happiness

Comes from the heart

And you are able to shed a tear of joy



But why does the devil have to make you cry,

But why

WHY

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I believe this is why a lot of people don't cry, b/c fear of there friends, but I tell everyone don't fear that if they aren't your friends b/c you cry then they aren't actually your friends, b/c your friends would be your shoulder for you through your hard times!!

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Solitary_Dreamer's picture

nice piece, though I rarly cry(I usually swallow whatever it is out of habit heh) it's true...it does make you feel better

Robert Black's picture

nice poem I really like it alot it describes what I feel like right now, could use a good crying. Oh well, but nice descriptions.

David Pinkerton's picture

Very true.

Ashley Weidner's picture

hey girlie..this was an awesome one! i totally loved it. keep writing poems and you'll be up there with the big dogs:) love ya lots

Alicia Batchelder's picture

This is a really great poem! It is true too. A lot of people hold in their tears because they are afraid of what people will think. I used to do that, but now when I am with my friends, I don't have to be afraid to cry, because they will cry with me. Beautiful work!! Alicia