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Spirits in Heaven
Tomorrow as beginning -- a future untold
creation of wonderment -- their lives' to share
Pledged in heart -- spirits entwined
forward with dreams -- love always there
Suns each in rise -- bringing days to years
untouched by time -- endearments strong
Forever beside -- with clasp of hands
each giving all -- carrying them along
Wake of moons -- cast by night
eyes that witness -- which heaven bears
Ones who follow -- mirrors of souls
shadows to self -- the future's heirs
Babes in cradle -- teetered for while
bundles of wonder -- making the home
Past now gone -- memories shine on
parted the children -- own roads to roam
Tomorrow as beginning -- a future untold
filled with wonderment -- lives to share
One to other -- pledged by hearts
forward their dreams -- love always there
Together in age-- final memories fade
sun to rise - brings last goodbyes
On wakened moon -- a haloed light
both dreaming forever-- through angel's eyes
Mother to children -- eternal through time
father as always -- strength in kind
Arms of comfort -- a whisper away
looking toward Heaven -- their spirits you'll find
© C.E.Vance
Just a absolutely Devine!
Just a absolutely Devine! Beautiful! What a wonderful tribute to those you love and love you. I loved reading this! Wow! Hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Thank you ever so much. After
Thank you ever so much. After viewing an old photograph of my grandparents I just closed my eyes and imagined. This was the outcome.
Wow! I read tis amazing poem
Wow! I read tis amazing poem in three different ways and it all still flowed beautifully!
first I read it the right side going down like this:
(yeah I'm crazy like that I guess I'm just too curious to find some hidden anomalies)
-- a future untold
-- their lives' to share
-- spirits entwined
-- love always there
-- bringing days to years
-- endearments strong
-- with clasp of hands
-- carrying them along
-- cast by night
-- which heaven bears
-- mirrors of souls
-- the future's heirs
-- teetered for while
-- making the home
-- memories shine on
-- own roads to roam
-- a future untold
-- lives to share
-- pledged by hearts
-- love always there
-- final memories fade
-- brings last goodbyes
-- a haloed light
-- through angel's eyes
-- eternal through time
-- strength in kind
-- a whisper away
-- their spirits you'll find
Tomorrow as beginning --
creation of wonderment --
Pledged in heart --
forward with dreams --
Suns each in rise --
untouched by time --
Forever beside --
each giving all --
Wake of moons --
eyes that witness --
Ones who follow --
shadows to self --
Babes in cradle --
bundles of wonder --
Past now gone --
parted the children --
Tomorrow as beginning --
filled with wonderment --
One to other --
forward their dreams --
Together in age--
sun to rise -
On wakened moon --
both dreaming forever--
Mother to children --
father as always --
Arms of comfort --
looking toward Heaven --
Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow
Trust you to over complicate
Trust you to over complicate it! Lol! Nice find!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Usually when I write I pay
Usually when I write I pay attention to the measure of syllables in a sentence to keep things somewhat in sync. On this piece I wanted the rhythm to be fairly consistent throughout, so I chose my wording a bit more carefully.
Thank you for noticing. I'm glad you enjoyed one of my handful of words.
What a lovely ode
What a lovely ode !! But somehow your skull and rose doesn't attract readers.... You ARE a decent person. Crush the skull and keep the flower. Its your option. Just a friendly suggestion.Please ignore.
©bishu
Thank you for the nice
Thank you for the nice comment. As for the skull and rose, I think it rightly symbolizes my perspective on life. A rose and skull--for thoughts of beauty and the macabre.