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Ghost
am I a ghost?
forgotten and mistrusted?
a vision of white and spite?
of day and night?
seen but unseen?
loved..but unloved?
you loved me once only to mistrust and throw awayrnwhat did I do to earn this mistrust?
when I looked at you i saw me.when you looked at me what did YOU see?
is that why you pushed me to the sea?
forgotten and used i was out of your mind.
or was I?
I was the sea drawn in only to be thrown away. you were the beach. abolutely irristable. a force to recon with. as much as I tried I couldnt fight.
was I a huge swell noticed and envied?
or a minor ripple going unnoticed and ignored?
we were as differnt as fire and ice.
ice such a cold and distant image.
I tried to figure out why you were so cold.. had the spark died?
I didnt think so. "psh" you said"it was never there"
what was i?
an experiment?..
NO! I was a ghost
I loved it. I know how you
I loved it. I know how you feel. I've been there.
~BUG~
yeah i hate being there.
yeah i hate being there.
i am going to say i like how
i am going to say i like how it has a nice meaningfull flow with words and how i shows feelings and when i read this my feelings reflected wht i read. very nice !
The one who has faith has every thing!
thank you. man things like
thank you. man things like this that i write I'm actually a little afraid to let people see as then it shows my vulnerability. but thank you for noticing it. i honestly try really hard for things to rhyme but it doesn't always work out. i also try really hard on my flow and for you to complement me on that means a lot.
I have been writing for 8
I have been writing for 8 years and i still need some work to get better. I have noticed over the years i have gotton much better at writeing but ido have my days that none of my pomes make any sence or have any direction of flow. The other thing i noticed is always carry a pad of paper and a pencle around, you never know wht might inspire you to write. If u ever need help feel free to message me and i will see wht i can do. Never doubt what one is unsure about.
The one who has faith has every thing!
i always have a notebook and
i always have a notebook and pen/pencil with me :)
Never be afraid to be you!
You're so lovely and compassionate, as well as knowing who should be accountable and when. We are similar people everyday, though never the same as each day we change :) HugSS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
thank you. some days i really
thank you. some days i really truly doubt it. but it helps that there are people out that that can see through the facade of constant strength and tom-boy-ness:)
The depth of our weaknesses
The depth of our weaknesses show us the hight of our strengths. God bless. HugSS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
i like that. i really like
i like that. i really like the way you phrased it
Hey nice one!
Although I do have a soft spot for any ghost ;)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
lol :)
lol :)