"homicidal thoughts"

what the fuck was i thinking

when i told you i loved you,

gave you my all,

called you my everything,

you ran along with your friends

left me there all alone

drownding in the tears i shed

but now the tears are gone

they turned into hate

and soon you'll be dead

as i pull the trigger to your head

you'll be drowning in blood

Author's Notes/Comments: 

....anger make you do strange things

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Good poetry but if you are planning to enter it in anything you might want to change the colorful language involved. :)