Sunday in the Park

Sunday in the Park



A concert in a pleasant park on Sunday afternoon

The highlight of the offering a complex lilting tune

Played with acumen by those well trained, their gifts bestrewn

Before a most discerning crowd which reaches for their boon



Crescendo rolls before a quiet and apt dénouement

Polite applause is scattered, before hitting restaurant

The knowing nods of gentlemen and strutting debutant

Who know the ins and outs and come expecting what they want



Upon the sidewalk sits a man with dirty calloused hands

Holding to a tarnished flute subject to his demands

And quietly he starts to play his blood upon the sands

A quiver in his simple tune, he plumbs the depths of man



A melancholy wafting air played just beyond the pale

Discordant notes of suffering beneath a metered grail

To one unscathed a breeze that passes barely touching sail

To those who’ve ridden out the waves a touch of old travail



No applause resounds after his musical display

Those who truly hear just shed a tear and walk away



© Bart Breen 2001

Author's Notes/Comments: 

THe form is a little awkward for the subject I think, but there are some redeeming qualities to this poem, still, I think.

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