sex of the time

when i think about time, i consider the cost of the total

why do you answer me with such disdain

the answer is simple

you don't love me

you're using me

dump your total in my mouth

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ramonathompsont's picture

Well done. I can see between

Well done. I can see between the lines how the author loves the man but the man does not love her back. he uses her only for his own pleasure.

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thank you, i consider the write an extension of my diorama.

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It's hard to understamd what

It's hard to understamd what you feeling bad about in this write...but hey, great to see back writing. Keep writing! ♥ too many typos...doing too much at once.

...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "


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to quote

it is a measure of tense that forms my answer... the reasoning is past tense - thanks for the comment love -- jb