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your love is a river flowing into the ocean of my heart,
night and day the currents carry the splendor of your majesty
on the soft river delta's fertile soil, luscious crops grow vibrantly
each day growing stronger, reaching toward the magnificent sunlight

travelling the slopes of the plains, gently moving across tranquil landscapes
lovely yellow daisies signal the spirit within your boundaries, displaying their glory
while clusters of snowberry, growing in thickets of light pink splendor, captivate my eyes
and as the meadow lark sings from atop the fence into the sunset, he displays his love for creation

clouds of the glorious skies pass by, set on fire with the golden evening light
i see the depth of eternity in your eyes, set ablaze with passion

whispering softly in your ears, a song of sweetness
you turn and gaze upon me, i feel the calm beauty of your eyes reaching out to me
from the depths of your soul, a whispering call of want ensues and compels me
the gentle winds of your breath dance upon my senses, a gentle mist fills the air

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from the depths of your soul

woudnerful write. a lot of passion.
you have a great style and use great descriptive writing.
keep penning
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Fitzgerald's picture

I have to say you are a very

I have to say you are a very talented writer. I've been reading all your work and it's all great!

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Fitzgerald's picture

Thank you very much. I'm a

Thank you very much. I'm a huge fan of yours keep writing to keep my happy lol Ssmoothie is also an amazing writer!

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I'm inclined to agree writers

I'm inclined to agree writers like you guys and horse spirit and bern and many more don't come along every day but this guys is certainly in my top 10 ;) of course I am number one as my poetry really resonates to my soul and tastes lol! ;) love my self, yeah well Im entitled lol!

But seriously Burke, you work can be beautiful, painful, romantic but all to the extremes of emotions what a huge heart and deeply sensitively creative mind you have these last three are beyond brilliant! :)
Thanks for sharing your pokets of sunshine cheers a lightly tanned SS :) keep glowing! ;D


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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thank you for your words ss,

thank you for your words ss, you are amazing yourself

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Oh btw beavis and 9intey ,

Oh btw beavis and 9intey , poet610 you're in there too,

And Chadigal... Didnt want him to feel left out, you know what great poets are like right guys ;)
Cheers SS.


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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your to kind

thank you very much i spend a lot of time here and i read all your guys work. and in doing so i have learned a lot from it.
thank you guys so much for that.
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