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I have become entranced by the words I say give me a gift and will show you the way check me now and I'll show you how I leave myself broken and completely devoured have you seen my favorite channel on TV that's my favorite expectation of what you should say go for a better trip go for a better try you start making my balance become your eye you are evil and obsessed with God and I don't trust you will you take me for a ride and give me more jewels to examine I love destroying .

 

 

thid is how we think my voice can be measured by this word right here you have tried to delete me from my own story and replace me with another person.  The one who accepts this position will be directed by a force of denial that you have seen me checking my own idea and you are curious how I will repair my own self without this device.  I have give. 

you love me and I love you we desire to be sharing the same space.  We are lovers from long ago and I cannot define the shadow of my love, it has become a flickering image on a wall in an ancient temple you saw me again and I wished you had give.

 

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Your talent pours through

Your talent pours through this amazing torrent of thought. Relationships are rarely tidy and simple, and you sketch the wild, tumultuous and thrilling ride with fascinating skill, then end on a striking metaphor that left me stunned and connecting personally to every word. 

 

Everything I would expect in an excellent prose poem.