star

grant me dreams and worlds alike

of glittery hopes and song's delight.

this world i hope for cast upon,

the dreams of the night, not fast but long.

no never fast and never fright,

to make the light i see tonight

the light of hopes and dreams in sight.

enter the night, that lovely night.

starfilled skies of love's abode

casting lots for hearts in tow

the cripple for the door

the creeping of the foundation

a song for which there is no station

 

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SSmoothie's picture

You have an exceptional way

You have an exceptional way with words 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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To know you read them brings

To know you read them brings me joy, peace and some sort of smirk and smile... I know you are well, and hope you are wanting something swell

Starward's picture

This has a very classic

This has a very classic sound.


Starward

burkej1h's picture

I was aiming for that sort of

I was aiming for that sort of story book flare, thanks for the affirmation

Cascade's picture

This poem is a star

This poem is a star performance of creative whimsy

burkej1h's picture

I love your use of whimsy,

I love your use of whimsy, makes me feel fine indeed

Coffeepot's picture

Wishes upon stars... nice

Wishes upon stars... nice write

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Many thanks Coffeepot, you

Many thanks Coffeepot, you made my day with your reply