your eyes are like the still ocean at sunset, I find myself lost within their currents

though the tide comes and goes my heart still remains fastened to your glances

now just distant memories in my mindseye


I sit and think about all the moments we had together, there is nothing left

feelings of devistation and denial now turned cold

I will never know your touch again

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  Sadness permeates your


Sadness permeates your tortured prose

I like the wording that you chose

The memories hurt I suppose

If love gets cold it usually goes


Thank you kindly for your thoughts

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Sadness is exactly what I was

Sadness is exactly what I was trying to capture, thank you for taking the time to reply :)