Could It Be Hate?

I severely dislike the person you are,

I severely dislike how distanced we are,

I severely dislike the way that you lie,

I severely dislike how you make me cry.



For the last time put me down,

For the last time turn around,

Keep walking until you don't remember my face.



I severely dislike how I almost hate you,

I severely dislike the fact that I love you.

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Afzal Shauq's picture

sure its a good poem..and like it... but to me the bad word is hate... I really hate to hear the word hate...I am for love..being a peace wisher poet and let me share with you..what is there in my mind...( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with.... afzal shauq ) hope my this famous say is the only answer to your questions raising in your mind about the happiest collective life.... yeah... we belong to same family of Adam...and we are true cousins..indeed