Submission

i give myself fully to You
i give myself freely to You

Your collar around my neck
Your name on my soul

i trust You
You protect me

i need You
You bless me

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Months ago, when I first ready this, I disliked it. My new reading strategy for your poems as helped to relieve some of the negative response. I like it far less than the others I have commented on, but I like it far more than my first experience of it. Does that make sense?


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