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Slut
SLUT!
You say it like it is a bad thing.
slut
He says it like He craves me.
SLUT!
You say it like You do not like what i do.
slut
He says it like He loves what i do.
SLUT!
You say it like i disgust You.
slut
He says it like He needs me.
SLUT!
You say it like i should be ashamed.
slut
He says it like He is praising me.
SLUT!
You say it and i know You are jealous.
slut
He says it and i know He wants more.
This has given me an idea for a poem of my own. Wow!
Starward
(Later still...)
Indeed, this amazing piece has given me inspiration for one too... thanx for that.
TAAvSM x
(i must be getting tired, i actually haven't ranted on in this critique! All apologies for my previous rants, i AM trying to refrain from ranting, in r/t and v/t, but still being slightly on the manic side i'm finding it difficult).