What's so wrong with me....*UNFINISHED*

I bang my head against the wall

Wondering why do I even try at all

I lived to please, but hurt instead

My thoughts are swimming inside of my head

What to do? Who to see?

What is so wrong

So wrong with me?

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Lori Moore's picture

This is very good as it stands. Nice rhythm and assonance. Another strong ending. Nice job.