Life's depressing

all is dead

I'm hearing a voice

inside my head

"end it now"

it keeps on saying

"Just slit your wrists,"

"just keep on flaying"

yet i resist

i know not why

why the fuck

just can't i die?

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I was feeling depressed cuz my relationship...

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Lori Moore's picture

First of all a personal note... I understand your emotion well. Take it from one who has, unfortunately, been there more times than I care to admit... you don't want to try. This is a good write. You develop the inner 'enemy' very well. The conclusion is wonderful, and seems to me to be the anchor of the piece... so much so, that I would have entitled the work "Why the Fuck." Just my thought. Nice piece.