Come By (song)

I love you

And I never will feel blue

Since you love me too

I can express my joy

My love was messed up as a boy

You play the guitar

I hope your not very far

Because you'll never break my heart

Like other girls, just pulling it apart

They couldn't stop tossing it around

Until you finally found

Where I was hiding

You made me learn confiding

I hope that you arrive

You make me feel alive

I care for you dear

Please stay with me here

I hope that you arrive

You make me feel alive

I care for you dear

Please stay with me here 

Even though we aren't together

I still search for you in this weather

Even though I may die

You're the reason why

I keep living today

You're lovely in your own way

I can help you

You feel the same as I do

I hope that you arrive

You make me feel alive

I care for you dear

Please stay with me here 

I hope that you arrive

You make me feel alive

I care for you dear

Please stay with me here 

I hope that you arrive

You make me feel alive

I care for you dear

Please stay with me here 

Now I found you on the porch

My feeling burn like a torch

As I come over 

You seem to move closer

And realize that its me

Its no more a fantasy

And I hope you stay 

Please don't go away

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I hope everybody can relate to this........

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_Imfine_'s picture

wow

Nice song bro...
Most of the lines flowed really well together except for
"because you'll never break my heart
But the other girls used it to play darts"
I like, and keep most the words the same just make it a little smoother and like a syllable or 2 less than what it is
But otherwise, very good
I like it a lot


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SeaOfInk's picture

any suggestions to change it

any suggestions to change it to?

_Imfine_'s picture

mmmh

Something like
"Because you'll never break my heart
Like other girls, just pulling it apart"

That sound good?


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SeaOfInk's picture

thanks walter I'll change it

thanks walter I'll change it now

_Imfine_'s picture

I know it doesn't really keep

I know it doesn't really keep the same words but it at least sounds better...
To me anyway


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SeaOfInk's picture

Thank you Walter! :)

Thank you Walter! :)

_Imfine_'s picture

your welcome!

Ah I feel cool now cuz I helped my friend wit his song xD


A mirror is all that is ever wanted from a shadow