My light, my love

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Thank you

There I was, drowning in despair, sinking to the bottom, tired of life
You gave me air and hope, pulling me from the brink of death
My light, my love

There I was, one man against millions, charging to my doom
You rode next to me, spear at the ready, our love won the battle
My light, my love
 
There I was, on the roof of the building, about to take the fast way down
You caught me at the last second, and talked sense into me
My light, my love

There I was, standing before a hooded, shadowy figure
You offered to take my place, changing even his heart
My light, my love 

Whatever you need, I'll be there for you
You can count on me, and I know I can count on you
My light, my love
Forever 

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...What do you guys think?

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ChryWizard's picture

WOW!!!!

I loved this piece. It gave me chills. It hit so close to my heart I read it twice just to make sure there wasn't any hint you peeked in my life and was inspired.

Well done; I like your style!

 

ChryWizard


As the eyes are the windows of our soul,

My poetry is the windows of my heart!!!

AquarianMale's picture

This was tender, richly

This was tender, richly adoring and affectionate. Although something in my heart of hearts tells me you are much stronger than the woman depicted here. If you  chose to excite, be courageous. The type of love you write about here has sovereignty and power. Show us that inner strength birthed from the Goddess you truly are! Indeed, that will perk a man's interest far beyond his ability to save you in the moment.