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That feeling when I walk into a room
No matter what I do, I remain invisible
That I, who can not be seen, can see so clearly
That I am simply fucking superfluous
That I am not needed in this realm, or any other

 

But, I shall not leave for a while
Life is so fucking beautiful, even if there is no one to share it with
I love this place that kills me day after day
That puts acid on an open wound
The poison has a divine taste 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Hi everyone! this is my first poem on this site, and I haven't written any for months, so please review!

 

Review from the future:

Me. Invisible. I can't even remember what that feels like XD

Amazing what confidence can do.

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©15 January 2013 - 11:12pm — bittersweetpoison
16 January 2013 - 3:57am — SSmoothie
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Wow, you caught my attention

Wow, you caught my attention here! Well done.. :) SS 

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

16 January 2013 - 4:02am — bittersweetpoison
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Thank you! I suppose i might

Thank you!
 I suppose i might only be invisible IRL :)

~Love, Poisonous

16 January 2013 - 4:46am — SSmoothie
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This IS real life sweety, I

This IS real life sweety, I assure you I am no figment ;D cheers SS 

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."