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Sweaty Pillow

Memories of yesteryears

Haunt at the break of dawn

Sweaty pillow the only witness

Others couldn't care less


©bishu

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Inspired by 48Daniel 

 

http://www.postpoems.org/authors/48daniel/poem/986898

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last updated 15 June 2014 - 5:45am
©15 June 2014 - 5:43am — bishu
30 June 2014 - 11:13am — Stardust
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short yet to the point.

short yet to the point. perfect poem, sir bishu :)

best wishes :)

1 July 2014 - 9:05am — bishu
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Thank U my Dear GoldenDust.. Nevertheless none of my poems

Thank U my Dear GoldenDust.. Nevertheless none of my poems are "perfect".Perfection is an illusion

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25 June 2014 - 3:02pm — SSmoothie
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this is truly a great piece

this is truly a great piece sir! wonderfully condensed but powerfully packs a punch!!! well done!!! it was inspired by a great poem too! hugss

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

26 June 2014 - 4:51am — bishu
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Thank you ever so much Respected SS

Thank you ever so much Respected SS for your worthy kindness

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20 June 2014 - 9:00am — TheShadowKnows
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Haha this is awesome! I like

Haha this is awesome! I like the flow and yet no rhyme. great

24 June 2014 - 6:36am — bishu
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Heartfelt thanks Dear Mr Daniel

Heartfelt thanks Dear Mr Daniel for your kind read

©bishu