Potato Dream

Dreams cooked in the fissures of the mind

Enliven us in dreary times and aids unwind

A jumbo potato gyrating on a plate with sauce

The fork a sadist stabs unkind 'tis potatos loss

Munch,munch,chew ,chew gulp,gulp the potato gone

Out of such funny dreams are great muses born


©bishu


Author's Notes/Comments: 

Inspired by Aditya Chandel

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TheShadowKnows's picture

Whoa very unexpected. What an

Whoa very unexpected. What an odd dream... Kinda creepy I'd you ask me bit still a good poem

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Feelin happy my friend Mr Daniel at your nice comment

Feelin happy my friend Mr Daniel at your nice comment. Really dont know how much I deserve it.Thank you !!


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Stardust's picture

"potato dream"?? lol i was

"potato dream"?? lol i was eating potato fries when i stumbled upon this...:D

but seriously, this is an unconventionally great read.i liked how you made a great metaphor out of something as simple as a potato :)

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Thanks Dear Stardust for reading & dreaming potatoes

Thanks Dear Stardust for reading & dreaming potatoes Cool


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