I Saw You

I saw you.

And I couldn't believe,

What just a picture of you

had done to me.

I saw you.

I took my time and viewed it right,

I got it copied in my mind,

Now my brain has taken flight.

I saw you,

So pretty you had me in a daze,

I visioned you for real

in so many different ways.

Oh I saw you,

But then reality set me down

It's nothing more than a picture,

I would never have you around.

But I saw you,

And if life is like memorex,

Then who ever that has you,

Should cherish you to death.

I Saw You.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

A simple picture

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Leah Hayes's picture

aaaaah ...the power of fantasy...

Leah

Dario Preston's picture

Nice piece. Makes one want to fall in love...

CHRISTIE FELTY's picture

ANOTHER ROMANTIC PIECE. I DIDN'T REALIZE THERE WERE MEN LIKE YOU STILL AROUND ;). I ENJOY READING YOUR STUFF SO MUCH I JUST CAN'T STOP, SO I AM GONNA READ THEM ALL. MUCH LOVE- JADED

Dark Angel's picture

I know that it is late to critique this poem.....but I like it alot!!
It reminds me of like things..yeah..
But really good work here!!
Keep going!

mwhatim's picture

romantic......I enjoyed
stay safe :o)