Accused

I was accused of being a player,

A cold hearted heart slayer.

Accused of being rugged toward other peoples feelings,

Accused of being selfish and very unwilling.

I was accused of being a pretender,

Too good to lose, too good too surrender.

Accused of being blind to what other people see.

Accused of being deaf to others who speak.

I was accused of being low, deep below sea level.

Accused of being Lucifer, You know, The Devil.

I was accused of having a temper thats quick as a whip.

Accused of having a proplem of controlling my lip.

I was accused of being a pusher, while pulling someone in.

I was accused of being a loser, even when I win

I was accused of trying to be God, while only trying to help.

I was accused of being greedy, while giving to some one else.

I was accused of being mean, a man without a soul.

I was accused of being lost, a man with no goals

I was accused of being everything except empty at heart.

So may I please be excused? So I can go fulfill that part.

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nancylangley's picture

I really found this to be interesting, just wondering though if everything you were accused of is true? THINK! Well anyways I enjoyed this poem, so keep up the good work my "FRIEND" See ya...........Nancy.........


NANCY LANGLEY 

Gary Mills's picture

What man hasn't felt this way and not known how to express it? Thanks, saved me hours of triffling writing. Good, naw, excellent work, and it flowed like a river.

tk2003's picture

i can definitely relate to this poem...there is nothing like giving your love, loyalty and devotion to someone and have them not trust you...been there...done that...not pretty...i love how you express yourself...never stop writing

nancylangley's picture

I love this poem, Leon. I think thats how others see me sometimes..... This poem would really make people think about who they are , the roles they play in their life... keep up the good work ok.....


NANCY LANGLEY 

Hidden Illusion's picture

Whoa! This poem's tight! Amazing! I'm impressed! I love the rhythm to this poem. Keep it up!

~ Hidden Illusion ~

Eric Santos's picture

Hello! Your poem is simply awesome. I like the way you write. Keep up the good work, buddy! God bless you! =)

Tara Dolan's picture

i like the rythem in this poem alot... nice job. i think this is my fav of the poems youve posted

~tc

Charlee Amick's picture

I really enjoyed that poem, it has a part of everyone in it.

CHRISTIE FELTY's picture

WOW. THIS WAS TIGHT.I LIKE THE WAY YOU DIDN'T WASTE ANYTIME EXPLAINING WHY YOU WERE NOT MOST OF THOSE THINGS BUT WENT STRAIGHT FOR THE ATTACK! I APPPROACH THINGS LIKE THAT SOMETIMES AS WELL. EVERY ONE I READ I AM LOVING IT MORE AND MORE. IT IS LIKE A BOOK THAT I CANNOT PUT DOWN. PEACE-J