As I sit here, I shut my eyes

Sitting, just waiting to die

No where to go

Seeing the vision of the black crow

Knowing my end is near

Knowing my end is here

Stopped the fight to take a breath

The bottom of the ocean, what a mess

Now I sit and look to the sky

Life’s over, I’m ready to die

My life had to end this way

I couldn’t take it another day

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Bottom of the ocean deep

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Dawn Parker's picture

well this is very very well written its really good strait to the point but i also believe its sad and also hope you are not

shan's picture

once again, very powerful and strong use of words, but it's sooo sad =( hopefully ur not sad now =)

that_one_girl's picture

There's always another day