Tear Drops and Dial Tones ( country song finshed)

verse 1:
i got a call at about 3 am
about a couple thousands mile's away from them
sister say's are you sitting down, i am now
you should probably head back this
momma dont look that great
everybody's here and she hanging on
i said ok, if i dont make it tell her i love her
she my everything, she the reason i'm so strong
and i know i'm the reason she hanging on

too.......

chorus:
alot of tear drops and dial tones
alot of years that i should have been home
alot of thing i should of done
that i cant take back, no i cant take back
ALOT OF TEAR DROPS AND DIAL TONE

verse 2:
April 10, 1999 worst birthday gift a mother could find
a knock at the door about a quarter to 9
officer say's he has to come with us
13 year's old and miranda rights
damn right i was scared as hell that night
sitting in that cell waiting for interrogation
to fine out the next 6 year's they where taken
that night there where.......

chorus:
alot of tear drops and dial tones
alot of years that i should have been home
alot of thing i should of done
that i cant take back, no i cant take back
ALOT OF TEAR DROPS AND DIAL TONE

verse 3:
I kept telling her I was going to leave
just pack my bags and walk down the street
with tear's in her she begged me please
letting out one last scream "BABY DONT LEAVE"
by time I figured out I was wrong
I called her back on her cell phone
she wouldn't take me back....
said it don't take that long to see
the fine line between her and me
you wanted lust and I was giving love
now I give you what you what you gave me

*click to dial tone*

chorus:
alot of tear drops and dial tones
alot of years that i should have been home
alot of thing i should of done
that i cant take back, no i cant take back
ALOT OF TEAR DROPS AND DIAL TONE's

Author's Notes/Comments: 

thoses that dont know every now and then i write a country song....frist part of this song came in a dream last night.....friend oince told me it you tell about your dream it wont come ture.....will i pray the frist part of this song never comes ture....with this said i give you: 

Tear Drops and Dial Tones

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SSmoothie's picture

It's very good, with the

It's very good, with the right music it could be a well loved song! Congrats! SS 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

belial_lair's picture

thank you

thank you so glad you like it

nightlight1220's picture

Really nice, riddles... I

Really nice, riddles... I enjoyed this. 

~peace~   http://www.postpoems.org/authors/nightlight1220/poem/962773

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

belial_lair's picture

that you just.....wrote the

thank you just.....wrote the last verse to it

nightlight1220's picture

No, we can't take it

No, we can't take it back...and we can't tell ourselves that it was justified, as many would try and coerse us to do...but we can move on and do the very very best we can to help guide others in a gentle way, so that one less person has one minute less pain, and the world becomes a better place. I don't like that hearts are broken...I never like that. But I love how you put it down...awesome.

 

~peace~

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "