Author Information
~*~ what i crave~*~
They way I fell for you words cant express
You now me better then all the rest
You know what I want you no what I crave
And you give that to me
W/ out one complaint
I no I can be mean and I no I can be rood
Butt there just something about you that I cant loose
You bring such pleasure to my life
And you do exactly what I like
The thought of your lips pressed against mine
The thought of your touch
Brings chills to my spine
I wait for your call each day
And there so many things to you I just can’t say
Like the way its you I crave
And how I want you more each day
hey,
This poem is good, I like it, but I think that if you fixed the grammar (eg. U=you,no=know..ah u get the point) I really felt this poem but the grammar kind of through me off a bit. but never the less the rhyme scheme is good and the poem is sound.
good work.
-kala
ps. check out my poems and critique please