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Damned
I wish
the smell of you
wasnt as bad
as the smell
of dead catfish
in the live well.
I wish the smell
of you wasn’t
as bad as the smell
of one fallen
just an inch,
and all the way
through the floor
to eternal hell.
I wish
the smell of you
wasnt as bad
as the smell
of dead catfish
in the live well.
I wish the smell
of you wasn’t
as bad as the smell
of one fallen
just an inch,
and all the way
through the floor
to eternal hell.
What... profound There's
What... profound
There's really no hope in this poem... I'm not sure how.i feel but the smell and damnation is palpable. Strong write.
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Lmao!
You always hit the nail on the head! It's an old one that bubbled up ;-)