I should have smelled the smoke with my third eye

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I watched her dicker

with the devil 

over the price 

of her soul,

apathy and envy 

in competition;

her red hair flowing,

those green eyes burning,

(perhaps I've gotten

that part backwards,

but she was stunning).

Life on Earth 

interrupted,

and she burned

burned all our shit.

 
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SSmoothie's picture

My kind of poem! 

My kind of poem! 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

running_with_rabbits's picture

I really like this..the

I really like this..the perhaps I have that part backwards I am torn aout...but its a solid piece!


Much Love

Ashley

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:-D

Thank you Dear! 

djtj's picture

Burned

Burned all our shit  I want to know more about this lady that dickers with the devil

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;-)

Indeed! Interesting woman, interesting time.