HeartStopper

Bright-eyed,  but absent minded,

a girl with many dreams,

is anything but blinded.

She dreams of success and power,

she is bold and creative,

much like a flower.

Her mind dances and screams,

with ideas

and creative things.

She wont let anyone stop her,

for she will be,

a Heart Stopper.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Please feel free to tell me what you think! if i need to correct something or if its no good, tell me! i need to know so i can try and improve it! Laughing

NO COPYWRIGHT!!!!!!

Thanks for reading.xx

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justanotherscreename's picture

This is very good. Flows

This is very good. Flows beautifully.

ashes_theartofburning's picture

I agree with H&L.

This was beautiful.

^-^


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

BeautifullyDawn's picture

xD

thank you! <3 Cool


Love Always, Me(:

hurtandlost's picture

your poems are like a breath

your poems are like a breath of fresh air, keep it up!:D do your own thing, no need to change anything...write whatever comes to the core, you seem wise for your age btw;)

BeautifullyDawn's picture

awe(:

thank you(: you guys make me feel all bubbbly :D haha thanks again <3


Love Always, Me(: